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sorry i forgot to upload this last night by Call-Me-Ferret sorry i forgot to upload this last night by Call-Me-Ferret
wow look at those shitty sai effects!!
Here's another version with just the background: Megalo by Call-Me-Ferret
A gift for KennyxKylepuffed01, enjoy!
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WARNING: This may be very offensive, but I would like to give my true opinion and help you with your art.
Vision: It is a nice pose, very fitting for the drawing and the character.
Originality: Very low. I have seen so much fan art like this, with characters as video game characters and such. The 3 stars I gave though, are for the character itself, not for the idea- the character is pretty original.
Technique: (This might be very offensive, be warned!!) Lineart is slightly chunky. Around the hair, the parts sticking out should be thinned down. On the jacket, I see a line- I don't know if this is a accident or not, but I would be more careful with the lines.
The style you're going for- it's fine, if you were going for chibi. I understand if you are though. If you weren't, I would say the eyes are wayyy too big on the face- and it's cutting out space for a nose. I would add a nose after adding smaller eyes. Now please note it is fine if you were going for chibi, since chibi usually has no nose and huge eyes and a huge head. Fluff should follow the jacket more then the head. Maybe sharpen the jacket edges, also. Add a few fingers too, even if you start with 4 that's fine.
Impact: it's great, I can easily see the jacket and the character and the eye, Just please bring out the character a bit more!
Good luck!
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Lliathefox Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016  Student Digital Artist
OH. please don't tell me this is sans '''TRIGGERED''' 
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Call-Me-Ferret Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016  Student General Artist
well
it's not exactly sans but-
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Lliathefox Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016  Student Digital Artist
H0t   The plams are drugs (AKA When the plams kick inV2) 
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jemeatswaffles Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2016  Student Digital Artist
aaaaAaaaAAAAH
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Call-Me-Ferret Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2016  Student General Artist
no prob
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jemeatswaffles Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2016  Student Digital Artist
omg, you seriously dont understand how much i lovegetting fanart-
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Call-Me-Ferret Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2016  Student General Artist
me too though-
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Ferret-Ko-Yo Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2016  Student Digital Artist
nice use of the blur tool loser
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Call-Me-Ferret Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2016  Student General Artist
thanks loser #237176842387
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